100WC #31 WIDE ORANGE CROCODILE WITHIN COLLAPSED

My goal is to write thing in dramatic way.

It was close. The ORANGE CROCODILE was making it’s way slowly over the COLLAPSED wall and I would soon be WITHIN the crocodile’s eyesight. I crept slowly in a WIDE circle around the crocodile. Then began to start to run towards the entrance of the old, broken and falling down castle. As I quickly moved to the door but a bit of wood tripped me up so that I went flying to the floor. The crocodile heard me and turned around. I saw the crocodile move towards me again and then I turned on heel and fled the castle via the door.

One thought on “100WC #31 WIDE ORANGE CROCODILE WITHIN COLLAPSED

  1. The start of this piece is fantastic. You really draw the reader in and build up the suspense. The varied sentence length works really well. Be sure to re-read your work out loud before publishing. Some of the sentences needed a little reworking.

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