I was hiding in the bushes when the ride operator got the wire cutters out of his back pocket. He cut the horse’s free. My hunch had been correct, the horses had moved when I saw them at lunch time having a break from all the children riding on them. After the ride operator cut them all loose they all whinnied to each other and ran across the field to the river that was down there. They were soon out of sight of my hiding place so I moved quickly through the bushes to pursue them further.
My goal is to have a cliff hanger at the end of the 100WC.
It was a dark and stormy night when I finally got home. Suddenly, I was stopped by the fabled sixth sense, I turned my body to look at the the castle on the hill next to my house. In the flash of lightening I saw that someone was standing there in the doorway of the castle looking back at me. I shook myself, turned back to the door and went inside. As soon as I walked inside I realised that all the pictures in the house showed the same picture – a person standing in the doorway of a castle. It was so weird that…
My goal is to create the 100WC based on mind reading or “mind messages”. I got the idea from one of the books I am reading right now.
I was getting tired of buying hamburgers for the wall with the paper mache hands, all it wanted to eat and all it ate was gigantic hamburgers. Even though the wall had no mouth it still shoved the hamburger into the space near the roof of the building. Some how it also managed to speak inside your head and it always said “give me more hamburgers, or else…” So, as always, I went to the nearest fast food place and bought another one hundred hamburgers, ninety – nine to freeze and one for the hands in the wall.
My goal is to write thing in dramatic way.
It was close. The ORANGE CROCODILE was making it’s way slowly over the COLLAPSED wall and I would soon be WITHIN the crocodile’s eyesight. I crept slowly in a WIDE circle around the crocodile. Then began to start to run towards the entrance of the old, broken and falling down castle. As I quickly moved to the door but a bit of wood tripped me up so that I went flying to the floor. The crocodile heard me and turned around. I saw the crocodile move towards me again and then I turned on heel and fled the castle via the door.
“MUM” I yelled as soon as I got home. “What are we having for dinner?”
“Come over here and you will see!” She shouted back.
“Fine” I mumbled and slung my bag into my room on my way to the kitchen. And then my eyes fell upon the slop the mum was making “AHHHHH MY EYES”. It was so horrible my eyes were burning in the sockets ,the pain was unimaginable.
“Time to eat” my mother called as she set it upon the table. I just couldn’t eat something so horrible that I puked right then and there and ran off to my room.
My goal is to add dialog to my writing.
It was the best time of the day. Dinner time. Toady hopped into the kitchen and his nose almost dropped off. “What are you making”? Toady asked his dad as the slime dropped through the sieve into the bowl.
“This year I am going to enter the smelliest smell competition” Toady’s dad said proudly. “And I am going to win it!”
“Dad” Toady coughed “Can you do this somewhere else”
Toady’s dad looked up from his work and said “why?”
“Because it stinks!” Toady cried.
“Exactly” said his dad.
“But what are we going to have for dinner?” said Toady.
My head pounded as I drew one more rattling breath. I was so thirsty that I felt as if any second I would die. Then I saw the most wonderful thing in the world. Right there. A small droplet of water on a leaf that had yet to be dried up by the sun. I slowly walked over to the leaf and began drinking. It felt so nice to feel the water trickle down the back of my throat. I drank my fill then went to get my friends and tell them about the lovely drops of water.
Bob was not happy. Even though his soldiers were marching to take over another world rich with gold he was still not happy. It was to slow to take over every world that Bob knew, one by one so Bob got his best scientists to work on a cloning machine. 3 months later… Bob was sitting on his throne when the lead scientist walked up to him “my lord” he said “I might have done it”. “Well done” said Bob in reply. “Let me see it”. As they entered the room Bob’s eyes widened. It was absolutely enormous and had blue lightning crackling all around it.
It wasn’t until I did my science project about ants that I realised how fascinating they were. For example did you know that the common American field ant can withstand pressures up to 5,000 times greater than its own body weight? Or that ants are as old a the dinosaurs? As I found this information I wondered that how can something so tiny do so many cool things? I also found out that ants can hold their breath for 24 hours? And that ants have two stomachs? When I finished doing the project I wanted to know a lot more about ants.
It was time for the race. I was at the starting line getting ready for my first win in my whole life. Not coming last. The whistle blew. I ran forward and was first to start, but not for long, the other kids were right behind me, I pushed with all my strength but all the other kids passed me. I was last. I kept going trying to get passed but found I couldn’t. I had nearly finished and was going to walk the last bit. I heard a sound behind me and looked. I saw someone else, I felt so happy. I wasn’t last.